It can only be good practice, and heaven knows I need it. So what of this weeks batch. Again I leave them untitled - is this usual? Must take another look at some of the Haiku related sites.
Winter, think sunny
Think warm foreign beaches
Winter, bearable
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Rain everlasting
Spring, summer, Autumn, Winter
Earth needs space to dry
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Rain on rain on rain
Falls on saturated ground
Flooding now certain
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The setting sun dies
Ending of another day
Sleep, refresh, renew.
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Winter night comes early
Cloaking day's end silently
Until tomorrow
Well, what do you think? Is there any merit in these short pieces. I will be carrying on with this game in the hope that it will bring about an end to this current period of writer's block. And if it doesn't? - well then I shall have to think of something else to try.
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